I think the same things of Rick B., the photo is too flou to give a clean impression. for me the eye of whom sees for the first time a photo.... it has to focus on the object or on the part that the photographer wants to exalt.... this photo doesn't make to converge the eye of the observer on the woman but unfortunately the effect flou is noticed very well. Attention ....is only my opinion... it is not the law . I think from that little things that I have seen in this site that you will find a lot of available people to help to grow you in the Art of the photo, because it is not a hobby but an Art . Best wishes.

Closeups are good, but they need much clarity to be effective. I love your daring attempts, though!!! I love that spirit in you....wish you didnt live so far away....we could have a great shoot; I could teach you sooo much!!! Anyway, hope you don't mind my Candor;let me help you. ~~~Rick~~~ " I love my Photography & love to shoot Models"!