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Mar 20, 2007

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Here are 4 articles that I have written and I am asking that you check them out and let me know what you think of them.  Be sure that you click on the number of my article to let them know that someone read it.  I can improve if you think I should and tell me what you think. 
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Posted: Tuesday March 20, 2007, 6:27 pm
Tags: sharing writing portfolio knowledge earning Penmanship [add/edit tags]

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Michael Dickerson Deluno (275) 		Tuesday March 20, 2007, 7:42 pm
I feel like Simon Cowell, except that I'm a writer, and Simon isn't a singer. I think you need work on nearly every aspect of writing, starting with the basics (spelling, punctuation, grammar, syntax, etc.). You're a long way yet from being a career writer.

I strongly encourage you to allow your kids to have the advantages of being taught by a professional English teacher.

I apologize for being so negative. That really isn't my nature. But, in this case, you asked for feedback, and I won't give you anything but my honest opinion.

Rebecca Haughn (1) 		Wednesday March 21, 2007, 4:34 am
Ok, I am not sure you actually read them. I have a college level of English and spell check was indeed used. They were currently rated #1 also. I have homeschooled my children for 14 years and would have learned even more about the English lanuage. I also earn consistently at another site that pays for posting. Therefore while you meant well I am not sure you really read those. My daughter has already written a book also and it is ready for publishing. Thanks for your efforts in any case.

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